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Saturday, May 9, 2009

rhyme: The Ideal Guy

yet another attempt at an unsadistic poem.

his eyes as dark as his dark brown hair
with a voice so sweet and a face so fair

with a guarded poise and his head held high
with a catch in his voice and a twinkle in his eye

who is well read, a man of the world
wise as his years and true to his word

ever so pleasant ,ready with a smile
with looks unique, has his own style

who can talk easy,with a tinge of fun
thats the guy i wish to have won.

2 comments:

RInz said...

interesting attempt at rhymes!
u took fair care
to jot down on the idea of ideal ;)

sangeethspillai said...

Oh Uni- Verse!
so much of literature on evry odr tag
n just one on this one
( which is well
the very reason why
the big bang-big-bigcrunch cycle
was set in motion)

Emotional poverty,such unusual
in a poet :)
bad cet...
she couldav won...